That email got me to reply, and moved our business to WP engine faster. Trafton gave me some info that helped convince our tech guy.

And then I stole that email in our campaign (with some modifications), to great results. I even got lots of "Wow, you guys are real humans and not robots" replies.

I'm interested to hear what you say is wrong with the email, because you haven't yet.

edit: The lead developer champion bit wasn't in the email they sent me.